Premise - Script Second Draft

I have written a rough draft for my Premise script, to get an understanding of the shots I'll use and events that take place, which will help me create my Animatic and figure out exactly what needs to be designed. The script is quite long as I have tried to include detail in the shots, and a lot of shots used will only have a matter of seconds between them. In my head, the story won't take long to show, but if it does start to go over my time frame I will make adjustments accordingly and remove/shorten shorts in order to reduce the length, as I have tried to include a range of story elements and shots, but some parts can still be left out if necessary.

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